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Braces Haiku

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:42 pm
by tacoma braced
Sweet Corn is all gone
Stainless wires just put in
Food has no joy left

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:59 pm
by bbsadmin
We did a Braces Haiku contest years ago on the main ArchWired site. I think it's fun. If other people would like to write some braces Haikus, I will move this thread from Off Topic to the main Metal Mouth Forum (because off-topic threads get deleted if not replied to after a period of time).

-Lynn

Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:56 pm
by wildtoo11
My first cheeseburger
Pain at beginning not end
Can't wait for next one.


:banana:

Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 12:12 pm
by opera^gal
Stainless steel pain
creaky teeth ever moving
beautiful smile wins!

Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 10:18 pm
by avy
eating causes chores
but food is my pleasure state
so chores i will do

Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 12:46 pm
by hal2me
Elastics cause pain
They are very small and tan
My smile will be great

ode to a vending machine - a haiku

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 4:51 pm
by sbechtel
Snickers are my fav
nougat carmel treachery
peanut treats no more